I will try
Try and forget
All the words
Said to hurt
Said to pain
Said to scar
I will try
Try and forget
Your eyes
Your arms
Your kiss
I will try
Try and forget
Times we shared
Times we spoke
Times together
When all it was
Was an emptiness
A meaningless –
An empty love
#Poem #EmptyLove http://wp.me/p2120g-2xM via @johndwm
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That is a very hard hitting poem Vonita, it is exactly how it feels to be hurt by someone who you thought loved you.
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Thank you Andy! Some of my poetry and writing can be quite confusing I guess, I sometimes tap into past feelings or experiences to write poetry, it is not always my present circumstance. Poetry is my therapy 🙂
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It’s a good thing to be able to tap into past feelings Vonita! It’s not confusing at all 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Lynz!
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most welcome!
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Beauty from pain…very inspired and universal.
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Thank you! I’m sorry I missed this comment previously ❤
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What a beautiful poem Vonita , I like it so very much. Take care.
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Thank you very much, Ernesto!
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…. But a fire of love dying can be rekindled!
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I do love that thought thank you, though sadly not in this case!
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See what you are doing? You got me back to your post, and no it was not empty love and it was a great love or un love poem better said, but ….forgot let me read again , o.k so i was on track, anyways you do lovely writing this kind of thing.
Love ya
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You too Charly, and thank you, and I ❤ Tina too because she is Tina, the empty love was all my love falling on some dead heart, and now all I gotta do is love myself 😊
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You better, or I’m gonna smack you in buttocs
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Lol
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can feel the emptiness….
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Thank you x
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