The joy I felt
When you came into my life
Was nothing compared to
The pain I felt
When you left
In the darkness
I remember times we shared
You were here
And now you are gone
It cuts through me –
A hole in my soul
Yes I am thank you. I wrote two poems in the middle of the night when I should have been asleep. I think sometimes at those times we write without our filters that we would normally use when writing during the day when we are consciously aware and guarding our thoughts to some extent. ❤
Amen. My dreams often wake me and my time become fodder for a play or song or blog post. Night time can be the best time for creative juices to flow. Keep up the good writing!
Vonita,
I am jealous about your GOD-GIFTED talent at the middle of night with It is my middle-of-the-night insomnia poetry, you can create melody,magic.
Wishing you all the best
Sadness, Vonita, true art. ❤
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Thank you Mark. It is my middle-of-the-night insomnia poetry.
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Damn. Still. Again. I hope the poetry helps, Vonita. ❤
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Thank you, it did! As well as the natural sleeping herbs I swallowed as well. 🙂
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Good job from Herb. 😉
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Thoughts with you try to stay positive 🙂
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Thanking you! This is my insomnia poetry ❤
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Insomnia happens to us all but getting those emotions out rather than storing them up 😀
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Thank you, am glad for the words again, have been going through a dry-spell!
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Well I hope your dry spell is a short one
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Your words are very telling. Hope you’re doing OK,
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Yes I am thank you. I wrote two poems in the middle of the night when I should have been asleep. I think sometimes at those times we write without our filters that we would normally use when writing during the day when we are consciously aware and guarding our thoughts to some extent. ❤
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Amen. My dreams often wake me and my time become fodder for a play or song or blog post. Night time can be the best time for creative juices to flow. Keep up the good writing!
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Thank you ❤
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Your words resonated with me. Sometimes, I feel like saying, “You were here. You never left. But now you’re gone.”
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I’m sorry to hear it, blessings to you ❤
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Vonita,
I am jealous about your GOD-GIFTED talent at the middle of night with It is my middle-of-the-night insomnia poetry, you can create melody,magic.
Wishing you all the best
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Wow, your words are too kind. I’m out of poetry atm, so was pleased to have those two poems in the middle of the night 🙂
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Vonita,
Honestly speaking to read your short and sweet poem is always enjoyable experience.
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Thank you very much, swajithkas.
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Very touching. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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