He caught my eye
He said hello
He smiled at me He smiled at me
My knees are weak
My tummy’s flipped
I feel alive He smiled at me
There is no magic
In this world
But for this feeling He smiled at me
I love how lyrical this is! And your use of the repeated verse really helps set a rhythm and makes me think of an elated heartbeat denoting nervousness and excitement 🙂
Thank you so much! I struggled a bit with this poem, normally I just type and post, but this was the result of a third attempt! And I was quite pleased with it, so am glad you enjoyed it too 🙂
remembered my crush. haha
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Aren’t crushes the best?!? 🙂
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Yes! Their smiles could make me hyperventilate. 😂😂
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Me too, I’m a fool for it!
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Crushes are the best! Until he introduces you to his wife!
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Lol!! Oscar!!! Keep my secrets will ya!
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I can imagine the feeling…u forgot..the brain turns mush 😀
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Totally!!
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hehehe..
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The poooochi feeling :D😆
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I meant Ooooo* feeling! Lol 😀
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Lol, it’s the best!
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Haha 😀 ^_^
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Wow! I love this photo and all that transmits
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Thank you! 🙂
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A beautiful smile can steal our thoughts and make us dream. A excellent poem and beautiful photo.
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Thank you, I’m a hopeless romantic!
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Good to be a hopeless romantic. Keep you young and hopeful. You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Beautiful photo and poetry. A beautiful smile can steal our thoughts and make us dream.
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Awww, very sweet!
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Thank you!
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I love how lyrical this is! And your use of the repeated verse really helps set a rhythm and makes me think of an elated heartbeat denoting nervousness and excitement 🙂
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Thank you so much! I struggled a bit with this poem, normally I just type and post, but this was the result of a third attempt! And I was quite pleased with it, so am glad you enjoyed it too 🙂
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It definitely paid off! 🙂
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Thank you! ❤
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I remembered someone’s smile ❤ ❤
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Nice! Sometimes the smiles are hard to forget! 🙂
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Awwww … I feel like I am 18 again here! LOL
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Thank you for the beautiful picture, I’ve only seen it now!
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That’s how I felt when I first met my girlfriend! Except, I had to replace he with she, for obvious reasons I suppose.
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It works with a she as well! 🙂
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Most certainly!
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You are such a romantic! Lovely.
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Thank you Janet. Yes I am a romantic sometimes. 😀
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LOL! Great! Luv it!
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Thank you! Xx
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