I’ll shine a light until I’m home
I’ll shine a light for you
And if you reach the door
Before I do
Please wait for me don’t go
I’ll hurry home I’ll run and fly
I’ll come straight back to you
For you are mine and I am yours
Forevermore so true.
I’ll shine a light until I’m home
I’ll shine a light for you
And if you reach the door
Before I do
Please wait for me don’t go
I’ll hurry home I’ll run and fly
I’ll come straight back to you
For you are mine and I am yours
Forevermore so true.
Poems and Petals 
Beautiful swing to the poem. I loved it for the most part, but I confess that my life has led me to believe we place too much emphasis on the duration of our loves, and not nearly enough on their quality. So I recoiled at the word, “forever” — but that’s just me.
Thanks for your post.
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I love your point of you, thank you! Yes, forever does sound and seem slightly ambitious I agree 😊 however the word seemed to fit into the rhythm of the poem so unless I can think of some other better word, it will have to stay for now.
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The freshness of youth, makes the inspiration is expressed in verses of much feeling. Your poem is very nice.
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Thank you, you are very kind 😊
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