The thing with addiction is that
Without the boost to prop up
And the after effects
Stealing head space
Life is a daily grind
Boredom stares in the face
Resentment of a life
Without the thrill –
Hopeless
I
The thing with addiction is that
Without the boost to prop up
And the after effects
Stealing head space
Life is a daily grind
Boredom stares in the face
Resentment of a life
Without the thrill –
Hopeless
I
Poems and Petals 
I may be slow…but this reads fantastic from both directions. I presume you intended that? 🙂
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Thanks for your comment. I’m not sure what you mean by both directions?
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I read it from the bottom up and it sounded as nice as reading it from the top down. 🙂 sorry for the confusion.
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Ah! I just read it from the bottom up, if I change the first line to just be addiction, then it works our perfectly! No it wasn’t intended, that gives me a new poem entirely! Thank you 😀
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I think it was your structure that made me read it from the bottom as well as the top.
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Thank you 😊 it is a beautiful insight and I love and am grateful that you took the time to read my poetry, it means a lot x
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You’re welcome. I enjoy doing it. 🙂
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Those lines hit home. I’m not telling which ones, though… 😉
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Oh now I’m interested nelkumi! 😀
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OH boy you got that right ❤
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😊thank you
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