I had a friend

January 4, 2017Vonita

We were friends for a long time

But now the worlds have changed –

The skies above my eyes,

And whilst we may still be friends

The clouds are grey.

11 thoughts on “I had a friend”

Nayana Nair says:

January 4, 2017 at 6:55 pm

Lovely poem 🙂

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1. Vonita says:
  
  January 4, 2017 at 10:11 pm
  
  Thank you 😊
  
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kalabalu says:

January 4, 2017 at 7:34 pm

sweet

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1. Vonita says:
  
  January 4, 2017 at 10:11 pm
  
  Thank you 😊
  
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Ruth Pearson says:

January 4, 2017 at 10:00 pm

Beautiful, I definitely relate to this feeling.

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1. Vonita says:
  
  January 4, 2017 at 10:10 pm
  
  Thank you for reading and commenting 😊 glad you can relate in some way x
  
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Debbie Gravett says:

January 6, 2017 at 6:19 am

Thanks for this reminder of feeling like this. I love “The clouds are grey”. So beautifully put.

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1. Vonita says:
  
  January 9, 2017 at 8:16 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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poetsjasmineblog says:

January 12, 2017 at 11:15 pm

It’s heartbreaking. Short, bittersweet and utterly heart-wrenching poetry. Thank you for this piece.

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1. Vonita says:
  
  January 13, 2017 at 5:37 pm
  
  Thank you for reading!
  
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  1. poetsjasmineblog says:
    
    January 13, 2017 at 5:38 pm
    
    My pleasure. 🙂
    
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