Every space that we fill
Be it important or small
Every breath that we draw
Be it unplanned or more
Every step that we take
Every act that we make
Moves us closer to be
Shining lights heavenly
Every space that we fill
Be it important or small
Every breath that we draw
Be it unplanned or more
Every step that we take
Every act that we make
Moves us closer to be
Shining lights heavenly
Poems and Petals 
Vonita, that was not only extremely beautiful but also amazingly powerful!
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Thank you so much Erika 💝😀, I wrote this a while back but was missing the last line! It came to me this morning 🙂
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It was worth to wait 😊💖
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A dynamite! Truly a great poem. Your words have a way with them that make me feel, make me look and say, WOW! Great work here! I like your style, while it is not strictly any known style, still it has good rhythm and flow and MEANING! Keep writing great poems like these!
If you can, please pay a visit to the latest poem I post and review it or share it on twitter/facebook:
https://theweavr.wordpress.com/2016/04/01/mourning-does-end-the-minute-death-leaves/
Thanks a lot!
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Thank you for reading and for your encouraging words! I will visit your poem 🙂
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A pleasure indeed to connect with you! 🙂
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Keep the lights shining.
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Will try, John, thanks! 🙂
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You are very graciously welcome, Vonita! 🙂 🙂
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This was a magnificent and inspirational piece, Vonita.
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Thank you so much, I was missing the last line but it came to me this morning. Thank you for your kind comments 💝
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The artistic swirls represented to me change and an emotional situarion, Vonita. Smiles, Robin ❤
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Thank you Robin! I was wondering about your name spelling, with an I or y, I see it is an I! 🙂
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