
Every breath I take
Leads me further
Further from the
Love we made
From stolen
Moments
Shared
From each
Memory
Every breath I take
Leads me closer
Closer to a
Heart set free
Where you
No longer
Have a place
Where you no longer
Inspire the words
From inside of
Me

Very well written!
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Thank you, Erika, I’ve had such a busy day running around, just felt like timeout and to write some poetry xx
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That was a great idea, Vonita…. what a benefit for us 😀
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GeeZus Christ this beautiful wow. So happy a found this blog 🙂
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Thank you!
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Delightful… 💟
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Thank you, Krystyna! 🙂
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Beautiful Vonita. I like how you can see her becoming free as the poem progresses. At the end she is unburdened. At the want time it was funny because I read the “Every breath I take,” and I was reminded of the song: ‘Every Breathe You Take” by Sting which is more of a stalkers anthem I think lol. Great writing. Never mind, where my mind wonders too sometimes.
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The Sting is a stalker song, isn’t it? And it was always one of my favorites. Sometimes all one can do is breathe, and with each breath move to a better place. Thank you for reading and commenting!
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