Have all our chapters reached an end
Will no more lines be written
Have all our sentences been read?
The climax has not yet happened
Our fairy tale not sweet Hollywood
So before I hide the book away
Before it collects a moon of dust
Tell me, is our story really over –
Has it finally reached an end?
THIS IS LOVELY.
Sometimes, like La La Land, it is over but you have love to hold on to.
OOPS, i just told you the ending…
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Thank you! I’ve seen lala land, but really wanted the Hollywood ending 😀
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Reminds me of that saying: In the end all is well. If it is not well, it is not the end!
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Wonderful saying, Erika! 😀
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I love it 😉
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Reblogged this on John Cowgill's Literature Site and commented:
By a great lady named Vonita.
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Oh, this is sad but love is worth the risk! Take it easy and I also wished for a happy ending of the film. . . and in my life I have had heartache.
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Saddly beautiful💞
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Thank you 💕
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I love the way the feelings sink in as you read along..
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Thank you, I’m glad you feel that way 😊
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I love your poems, Vonita! They are simple but apt truths. I would count it a blessing to write a poem with you.
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Thank you Herbert! It would be a blessing, I’ve never written a poem with anyone before x
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Great! I have only done it a few times. I think the best way to do it is through a Google Doc. Is this a viable option for you? And it doesn’t have to be right now, btw. We can do it at your earliest convenience.
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Ok can you send me a link?
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You will need to have a gmail account f us to edit a document together. If you have one, send me an email to scattydallas@gmail.com and I will invite you to edit a document with me.
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I will send tomorrow
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This made me think of the movie The Way We Were.
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I’ve never watched it, have the DVD still clingwrapped at home, I picked it up at a sale once and still on my to-do list! This weekend!
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For sure! Great film.
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This is a beautiful and thought provoking poem.
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Thank you! 😊
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Thank you Melanie! X
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