Your arms around me
Caressing, loving, caring
Hit the sweet inside of me
Your lips so lightly
Teasing, flirting, touching
Hit the sweet inside of me
Your eyes upon me
Enticing, glowing, watching
Hit the sweet inside of me
Your tongue erotic
Traveling, kissing, tasting
Hits the sweet inside of me


Oh what an enticing poem V ! very nice! 🙂
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Thank you very much Zee!
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Trés bien! Love the repetition in these tercets, it accentuates the feeling of insatiable desire.
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Thank you Oscar it feels like a long while since I’ve written a poem that hits my sweet spot, but this one does!
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Beautiful, Vonita. So romantic.
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Thank you Erika!
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😊
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A lot of passion. Nice.
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Thank you!
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SWEET !!!…..I thought that was well written…It hit my sweet spot.
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Oh good, thank you, I’m glad it did!
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Wow! This is powerful…just beautiful. Lovely! Very well done, my friend! 🙂
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Thank you, am struggling with poetry of late so am thankful for this one that popped into my head last night! Xx hope you are enjoying the lovely weather!
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We are, thank you! Makes such a difference to work and lifts your spirit… I reckon that we are suffering from a lack of sunshine and Vitamin D. Inspiration to your poetic mind, Vonita! Overcast today, so day off from gardening… 🙂
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Wishing you a lovely week ❤ hope you enjoyed your day off gardening!
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A winner, Vonita.
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Thank you, Mark! I did enjoy writing this one!
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❤
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