
So many nights
I wished you to stay
In so many dreams
You visited me
But now I’m awake
And the night is still young
You are alive
Though our dreaming is done
I wish you well
I wish you life
I wish you happiness
And no more strife
It is me that must say
It was I who was Eve
You were my Adam
I wave you farewell

lovely flow
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Thank you, Simon 🙂
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SWEET AND SIMPLE
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Thank you, NAREN!
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Awe!
Now i’m jealous..
lol
kisses chris
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Thanks Chris, hope you are well 😀
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That was really touching, Vonita. The picture goes so well. Treasuring what was but also moving forward!
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Thank you Erika! Yes, trying to move forward 😀
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Big hugs, Vonita 😊 💖
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I agree with Erika, lovely poem. I like the end. ” It was I who was Eve / And you were my Adam.” I wonder what would have happened if Eve left Adam, I guess none of us would be here.
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Thank you, Mandi! Yes I guess none of us would be here 😀
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Very lovely
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Thank you, Lynz!
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So wistful. It takes courage to let go.
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It does, Victoria, thank you for commenting 🙂
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May we never say farewell to you.
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Well, that is kind of you, thank you!
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You are very graciously welcome.
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Was there a serpent in between that made your Eve and Adam bid each other goodbye? A love triangle… 🙂
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Totally not Ompong, love triangles are evil 😉
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I’m reading it again… I want to guess the reason behind why they parted. Hehehe!
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It’s a riddle, Ompong! Who is Adam, who is Eve, and why did they part? 🙂
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I’ll become a sleuth for today. Step aside, Sherlock… Ompong the detective is here! Hehehe!
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Girl friend, my Adam well I got to say good riddance to that boy! He was nothing but trouble with a capital T! 😀 I love your sweet heart and your writing. I had to take a break and come visit you! I’ll get to read more next week because I’ll be off work taking Alex and I’ll be waiting! So I can read more of your lovely poems! BIG BIG Hugs ❤
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Thank you for visiting! I was at work when your comments came through, so wasn’t able to reply straight away. All the best for next week, hope it all goes really well! And have a lovely weekend too 🙂
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