Water rushing as fast as it can go
Over the edge, submitting to
The power that will take it
Where nothing is
Promised but
The earth
Below
Water rushing as fast as it can go
Over the edge, submitting to
The power that will take it
Where nothing is
Promised but
The earth
Below
Poems and Petals 
Indeed, as beautiful and refreshing as a Waterfall!
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome! :))
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so pretty 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂
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Excellent! Love waterfall.
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Thank you ❤
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Love this concrete poem. I think it’s perfect!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Good morning Vonita – This was certainly beautiful to read this morning with my first cup of coffee… Thank you…
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Good morning Michael! Enjoy your coffee, I am about to have an evening coffee, it is 10pm my time! Thank you for your kind comment 🙂
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Love your poem. It is perfection!
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Wow, that’s a lovely compliment, thank you!
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Niagara Falls…. my beloved falls…. I spent so much time there when we lived in the suburban of Buffalo. The poem is great and I love the way you positioned the words. Great!
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Thank you so much, I feel ashamed now to admit I didn’t know it was Niagara Falls!
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Who cares… that way the “coincidence” means even more to me… 😀
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Ohh, I like how the lines seem to fall into the waterfall, it made the words more visual and powerful for me. Yes!
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Thank you! I never set out to do that, it just ended up that way. I was pleased when I saw how it had worked out! 🙂
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Really, well that is fantastic, some things always have a way of working their magic.
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i just cant deny the fact that u are so awesome !
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Thank you so much!
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Absolutely dig the arrangement of this soothing piece and that illustration’s such a beaut…..bedazzling! 💖😄
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Yay, thank you! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Scintilla of thoughts..
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Thank you for the reblog 🙂
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I absolutely love your posts.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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