Panic is rising
Rising up and
Light is growing
Growing dimmer
While darkness
Is darkening
I steel myself
Trying to keep
Safe from
Demons inside
Rising up to
Throttle
My heart
Not knowing
Where to go
Or where to turn
I hold myself
Panic is rising
Rising up and
Light is growing
Growing dimmer
While darkness
Is darkening
I steel myself
Trying to keep
Safe from
Demons inside
Rising up to
Throttle
My heart
Not knowing
Where to go
Or where to turn
I hold myself
wow beautiful poem. Hope you are alright now after fighting with the demons…
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Hi, thank you, my kids are back from school now (first day of school after summer break), the demons are asleep until tomorrow when I am left alone once again. I do not like to be alone. Except for Mondays when I am used to being alone. Being alone on Wednesdays or any other day apart from Monday awakens the demons for some reason 🙂 Thank you for commenting!
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But I guess you have your poetry right… it will keep you engaged 🙂
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Do you mean the love / hate relationship I am having with my writing? My poetry ain’t buying me lunch in the same way my day job used to LOL 🙂 Thanks for commenting!
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Beautifully written. So sad.
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Thank you, there are battles I have to be careful with, hence my url name movingtowardsthelight, because there is not always light 🙂
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I understand.
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Thank you so much 🙂 All is well, there is no reason to feel anything other than well, that is the most annoying part. It just happens.
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This is a beautiful poem, and one I can relate well to. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, am glad others can relate.
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This is one your best poetries! Bravo. I loved it!
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Wow, thank you so much! 🙂
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Very beautiful and moving. Let me know if you want critical feedback or not.
I can really feel your pain in this.
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Feedback would be good thanks 🙂
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Sometimes that’s all we can do is hold ourselves
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Yes, that is true 🙂
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I love this!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A beautiful description of a dark and ugly beast. x x
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Thank you very much. It was written with experience of those feelings. Xx
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I have battles with the same demon, it’s not easy. Xx
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I’m so sorry to hear xx
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Don’t be Hun I’m winning xx
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be alright!!
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Thank you!
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beautiful poem
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Thank you very much
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Lovely imagination 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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That sounds very dramatic. I hope you are doing ok, dear!
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Thanks Erika, it is an older poem of mine I reposted it for the daily prompt!
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Ah.. ok! I did not noice that. It is a very good one!
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You are an incredible poet 😊 Have a wonderful week ~Amy
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Thank you, Amy! Have a wonderful week too x
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Another great poem
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Thank you very much!
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Awesome poem!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome 🙂
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