The clouds are hanging heavy and low
Like a curtain hiding the guest of the show
The star of the day – our sun and our light
Is held captive, dimming our sight
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The clouds are hanging heavy and low
Like a curtain hiding the guest of the show
The star of the day – our sun and our light
Is held captive, dimming our sight
https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/guest/
Clever wordplay associating the sun with a star 🙂
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Wow!
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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I like the play of words here. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya 🙂
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Amazing imagery laced with words. Vonita ❤
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Thank you, Asha 😍
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But once the wind blows that curtain clear
Starlight will twinkle, constellations reappear
Alas only to be outshone once more
By the resplendent rising sun at dawn
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Wow that’s beautiful, nice writing, thank you!
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Hope you don’t mind 😉
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Not at all! 😊
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The sun as a guest ? Good idea…
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hi,
I want to have a guest post in ur blog of my poetries?
do u have such provision?.if yes,then how can I do so..& if no..then can u please suggest where I can post as a guest blogger or can u give some links of those bloggers with large no of followers & who allows guest posts
regards
AATIF
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You can email me a post and I will post it with a link to your blog
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TITLE:- O GOD NOW COME TO THE EARTH
Understanding Todays’s world is Arduous Task,
Like filling water in the Broken Flask.
what were we and what we are,
All emotional Relations are shifting Far.
Sentiments & sacrifices are mere words
They seem to be as we have Nevrr heard
God has created us to survive,
but we are vandalising each other’s lives
who shed Tears is ineed the faulter,
its nothing but just salted water.
Ecstasy is Altering in to Embarrassment,
No flower can Bloom in venomous Environment.
O! god now please stop taking our test,
come on the earth and abolish tempest.
a emotional Poetry composed by:SYED SABAH UR REHMAN-‘Aatif’
for more poetries visit:- https://merejazbaat.com/
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i have sent you my english poetry her itself..
please post with my blog’s address below
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Thank you
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kindly just inform me when u post my poetry
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https://movingtowardsthelight.com/2016/12/10/guest-post/
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