At the edge of
Endless blue oceans of sea
Steps urging me to
Cry out earnestly
Is there anyone to rescue me?
The dimming sun
Looks on humorously
Cooling the land while
Whispering quietly
Day is passed, welcome dark
At the edge of
Endless blue oceans of sea
Steps urging me to
Cry out earnestly
Is there anyone to rescue me?
The dimming sun
Looks on humorously
Cooling the land while
Whispering quietly
Day is passed, welcome dark
Poems and Petals 
dreamy & beautiful….
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Very beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Love this. May I reblog to “Tales of Unwise Paths?”
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Yes, of course, thank you for your kind comment 🙂
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Goodness. That was quick! A pleasure – with thanks.
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I’m online at the moment, have a poem about to post 🙂 It’s a prayer.
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Interesting. I’ll come back to you.
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It’s posted.
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Reblogged this on Tales of Unwise Paths.
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Thank you for the reblogs and for supporting my work 🙂
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A pleasure 🙂
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“Whispering Wings” may I reblog?
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Yes of course! 🙂
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Many thanks. 🙂
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Did I mention you were inspiring???
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Yes, thank you Erika, you are so wonderful! Please forgive me I haven’t had a chance to accept the award, and short on time lately with work and life! ❤
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Don’t worry, Vonita. I just want to show you how I appreciate you and your work ☺
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Thank you Erika!
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☺
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I’m sure you have a secret and ancient recipe of creativity.
Wonderful!
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Oh I don’t know about that, but Thank you. I always think every poem might be my last! 🙂
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It should be! Because our last is always our best. When I write I think this is the last time I’m writing and I guess that makes me give my best.
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Very true! Thank you for sharing this. 🙂
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Very beautiful
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Thank you 😊
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That is beautiful. Thank you
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Thank you for reading!
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Rich with symbols (to me) and images. Beautiful!
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Thank you Lola!
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Sombre….
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Thanks, I wrote this a while back but thought it fitted the prompt quite well!
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There are times we may question into what seems like the vast void.
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I know, thanks for reading! ❤
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Poignant piece of poetry, MovingtowardstheLight! Would you be interested in writing a page of poetry for Girl Poems? I feel like your writing style would add a certain dark flavor to the work. If you’re interested you can email me at GirlPoems@yahoo.com Let me know, thanks!
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Hi, thanks for your message! You are welcome to use this poem if you would like? Thank you for thinking of me 🙂
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You’re welcome and no thank you, it doesn’t fit the theme, I just liked the style of this poem. From reading this I concluded that you’d be able to create a work that would fit Girl Poems.
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“Is there anyone to rescue me?” — this line hit me hard… poignantly beautiful as always ❤
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